Autumn is...
We have been learning to use adjectives and adverbs in our writing. This helps to create a clear picture in the head of the reader.
We hope you enjoy our Autumn is... poems and that they create a clear picture in your head.
Autumn
is yellow crunchy piles of leaves blowing away.
Autumn
is nuts tumbling from the nasty old oak tree.
by
Hadassah
Autumn is shiny acorns dropping
from the giant oak tree.
Autumn
is leaves dipping on the muddy ground.
by Nader
Autumn
is yellow and orange leaves
swirling and dancing to the ground.
Autumn
is cold frosty days.
by
Molly
Autumn is big acorns falling to
the wet muddy ground.
Autumn
is colourful leaves floating to the hard, dirty ground.
Autumn
is colourful leaves drifting through
the air to the dirty ground.
Autumn
is conkers and acorns bonking me on my head then bouncing onto the dirty dusty
ground.
by Jessica
Autumn
is colourful leaves drifting down
from the tree.
Autumn
is brown acorns drifting from the skinny trees.
by
Aoife
Autumn is colourful and big
leaves floating down from the old oak trees.
Autumn
is big chestnuts tumbling from the old big trees.
by
Charlotte
Autumn
is spikey chestnuts bouncing on the hard ground.
by
Summer
Autumn
is crinkly leaves
tumbling to the muddy ground.
Autumn
is short days getting cooler.
by
Isobel
Autumn
is red leaves swirling
down from the tall tree.
Autumn
is acorns dropping on the roof.
by
Unathi
Autumn
is red leaves blowing
in the strong wind.
Autumn
is conkers falling down to the frosty ground.
by
Maryam
Autumn is leaves flying over the car.
by
Epeli
Autumn
is playing in the
leaves.
Autumn
is crunchy yellow leaves.
by
Faiqah
Autumn
is cold days.
Autumn
is red crunchy leaves.
by
Sohail
Autumn
is colourful leaves.
by
Joshua
Autumn
is cold days.
Autumn
is yellow leaves.
by
Anav
Your "Autumn is..." poems are just stunning Room 9. You have used fabulous adverbs and adjectives (and I noticed some great verbs too!) to bring your writing alive and to create such lovely pictures in the mind. Aren't we lucky to have so many beautiful autumn trees at our school?
ReplyDeleteWhat wonderful writing Room 9! I love the descriptive words you have chosen.
ReplyDeleteWhat wonderful autumn poems Room 9! I love how clearly you've described autumn and how the season changes. From Molly's Mum (Theresa).
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