Friday, 5 May 2017

Here is a sample of the independent writing done this week around our fabulous, leaf experiences.


We are learning to use adjectives and verbs in our writing for interest.

Can you spot the adjectives and verbs?


My friends and I had a noisy, exciting leaf fight. I scooped up the leaves. I threw the leaves.

By Nader

I like Autumn because there are leaves that are red, orange, yellow, green and brown and there are acorns.
By Sibgha

On Tuesday at school we had a crazy leaf fight. We made leaf angels. It was exciting. I liked it and you will like it too.
By Jessica

When I was playing in the leaves I saw the leaves had lots of different patterns on them. It was fantastic.
By Charlotte

On Tuesday, we played in the leaves. We made leaf angels. We had to move our arms and legs. I liked it. 
We saw brown, yellow, orange and green leaves. 
I scooped up the leaves.
By Lucy

When we went out to play in the leaves it was exciting. When we came inside there were leaves that were itchy in my hair and I had to take them out.
By Ira

1 comment:

  1. It sounds like you all had a great time playing in the autumn leaves!

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